Category: directing

Dune, part two

Earlier this year, I had the pleasure of watching Dune: part two. I shared my thoughts with my film group, which i’m adding in edited form here:

I greatly enjoyed watching Dune part one. While I have not yet watched this film on the big screen, its scale and humanity come across strongly. Watching it again on Netflix was a pleasure: I have read the novel in the meantime, and seeing the details: a foreshadowing here, a glance there; was thrilling. But, as Chani said, this story was only beginning and I was looking forward to watching part two.

While my cinema trips are still rare, I was very excited to watch this film on an IMAX screen. Yes, the picture is impeccable, but also the audiences are better behaved too. No one’s here to chat or look at their phone (at least in my screening): the focus was fully on the screen. What was on screen was stunning.

From the first words of the Navigator against that black screen, the film immediately dropped you into this new universe. I liked the way it started a few moments after part one finished, and once the Sadukar started floating up the rock formation, only to be obliterated by the Fremen’s hidden army, I was completely invested in and convinced by the story.

The screenplay visualises Frank Herbert’s novel with economy and imagination: Feyd Rautha’s psychopathy comes across in one (or two) strokes; the ambiguity of Paul’s adopting his holy warrior role is played out in the zeal, skepticism and horror of other characters. Zendaya externalised this perfectly and I loved how the story ended on her standing alone, away from the war to come.

Director Villeneuve got terrific performances from his quite astonishingly good looking cast. Some interesting observations have been made on how using different lenses emphasised Paul growing into his role, but his performance was riveting per se. Javier Bardem and Josh Brolin’s comic chops were used as well as their ability to menace. Christopher Walken’s stillness showed his power amid this war – so much so that you could fully see his coming to Arrakis was an act of weakness. The quartet of Ferguson, Rampling, Pugh and Seydoux made the Bene Gesserit a hyper-Machivellian force to be reckoned with. Skarsgard, Bautista and Butler made the Harkonen’s into pretty much the most terrifying family since the Borgias. Even Anya Taylor-Joy’s cameo as Alia was spot on.

As with part one, the film’s sense of scale, combining design and location with the tangibility of the visual effects creates worlds that you can fully believe in. (Geidi Prime, with its bread, circuses, pollution and division, is a wholly convincing future Earth.) The sound, with a few moments of muddiness around dialogue, was impeccable, combined with imaginative editing and Hans Zimmer’s most beautiful score.

I do think back to David Lynch’s film of Dune. He did say that he “slowly went crazy,” during its production. Its myriad voiceovers and muddled storyline points to just how difficult this work was to adapt: Villeneuve and his team must be praised for doing this so successfully. I wonder what Hollywood will learn from this: even bigger budgets, more stars of the moment in lead roles, lots of worms and many-fingered crustaceans?  Or maybe they’ll look for well crafted stories? The box office success of Barbenheimer, along with American Fiction and Anatomy of a Fall’s screenplay awards gives me hope.

By the way, it might seem churlish to add that no one in this film has actually said what the Spice is used for, or that on the announcement of a holy war, I blanched slightly at the prospect of witnessing yet another battle scene. But the story paused just then; it felt like a perfect break.

The water of life looks delicious. Roll on part three.

The walks, part two

The following day I trekked to Bostall Woods, where I shot some video in the forest. I tried to avoid shooting people there, mainly dog-walkers and ramblers, but caught a few of them, partially on camera and definitely on the soundtrack. Also on the soundtrack were tripod noises from the various camera moves I was attempting: definitely some practise and different equipment testing needed there.

I also returned to the river, this time near the Thames Barrier and surrounding warehouses. Some buildings were derelict: I wondered what would be in their place the next time I visited. These were areas that only cyclists and walkers could pass through.

As I carried the heavy photography equipment around the Thames path and surrounding neighbourhoods, I remembered the advice in a guide for wannabe Magnum Photographers: buy comfortable shoes. I’d like to visit more on foot and by bike in future.

The Thames Barrier under test

Later I shot more video with one of my softbox lights. Following a YouTube tutorial, I tried techniques for video lighting that I hadn’t understood before: I enjoyed the results and will work on them with my own camera. There is still so much to learn.

On returning the equipment, it was a shock to use my mirrorless camera again: it felt light and manageable with familiar controls; almost like a toy. I will shoot with another rental next month; definitely a different camera, just to see how it works with videography and photography, and I’ll be one step closer to finding my regular videography camera.

Short film: Sisyphus

Having shot tests and short films on a variety of cameras, it was interesting and reassuring to return to shooting a short film with a familiar camera: my Fujifilm X-Pro-1.

While this model is now supplanted by superior updates, I enjoy using this camera for its manageable size, simplicity of control and terrific image capture, which served me greatly when shooting with it before.

The project this time was “Sisyphus”, a short film about an endless quest, which I shot on green spaces near my home in south east London.

On set TikTok

As a filmmaker, I’ve been very interested in writing and directing dialogue-free stories: it was enjoyable to build a story with just sound and vision, and excluding words.

If I were to do it again, I would aim to record better sound. The in-camera microphone caught a lot of wind distortion. While the camera has no socket for an external microphone, I could have recorded clean atmosphere tracks with my digital sound recorder.

Editing in iMovie was enjoyable. While I have the rudiments down on this tool, I’d like to experiment more with sound post-production on future projects.

According to Zanah Thirus’ excellent and informative microbudget indie filmmaker’s podcast, the most welcome compression for festivals is an H264 compressed MP4 file. Getting to this with iMovie was difficult: for some reason, when exporting, my settings button didn’t show. It was sheer luck that I clicked on a certain part of a grey area on the export window that brought up the menu I was after.

I’ve been editing some other videos; mainly test shoots and home recording, but in every shoot and edit I have aimed to learn something. Whatever the mistakes or learns in this, I enjoyed this production and look forward to my next.

Realities

I’ve just completed a short film that I’d been working on for a few weeks.

“Realities” takes an idea from a science fiction feature screenplay I’m currently writing and imagines it in another setting. While I may not have brought complete clarity to the idea, I enjoyed making this short film and may rework aspects of the feature script as a result of making this.

Realities from Burning Details on Vimeo.

Two of my favourite aspects of this short film were building props and recording sound, the latter of which has been a problem in previous shoots. My next hope is to use more lighting, which I have also found difficult previously: short films offer great opportunities for experimentation.

Now “Realities” is complete, I’m going to make another short science fiction film, from a screenplay of about equal length. I have a few other ideas mulling around, as well as the opportunity to try some new editing platforms: I’ll see what new aspects I can bring to these productions.

New filmmaking

After making my environmental short, I have started work on a new short film.

I wrote the script some months ago, but put it to one side as I had started writing a feature screenplay that expanded on this short’s idea. As writing progressed, I returned to this short as I found myself more and more interested in playing with its ideas.

Mid-shoot

Although realising this short film is a daunting prospect, the shoot has been enjoyable so far, with props and shot set ups I haven’t used before. Where I think things will become complex is with the sound, which will be a huge part of this film.

In any case, I’ve greatly enjoyed the process. I’m looking on short films more as sketches or practice and I’m enjoying making as many as possible, on any media I can use. And the more I do it, the less daunting it will be.

TikToking

The social media platform TikTok, with its short form videos displaying stunts, humour, music, politics and mischief, has amused and fascinated me for some time, so I’ve decided to make a few short films for the platform myself.

While the features of the platform allowing you to upload and edit phone videos are straightforward and simple to use, some content creators have done some fantastic work with transitions and camera moves: all very inspiring.

My camera

Most inspiring for me are the people I’ve come across on this platform. I’ve learned about design, architecture and cooking. I’ve listened to varying views on politics, economics and cinema. I’ve been fascinated by historians and polemicists. All these individuals, with their interesting, at times irreverent but always well put together videos.

Every social media platform seems to have a “moment”: Facebook’s first flurry in the early part of the century; Tumblr’s glow up a few years later; Twitter’s intersection with politics and culture a few years after that. All these moments have been extraordinary, and all have soured somewhat, whether with content problems or algorithm issues. Even as the platforms themselves have gone on from strength to strength financially, much of the same user affection from those earlier highs evaporates.

TikTok is having such a moment, with users trolling the former president and content creators building careers off their micro-short uploads: maybe bigger moments are to come. But in the meantime, it’s great fun to use.

The air around us

Following my WHO Health for All film festival entry, I decided to follow up on another idea I had for an environmental short film.

The idea was concerned with air pollution: I’d read news stories about people suffering respiratory illnesses near busy carriageways like the North Circular Road and Park Lane; also Ella Adoo-Kissi-Debrah’s case had been in the newspapers for some time.

On researching air pollution’s effects on the body’s organs, I depicted these with watercolour paints on a pristine white shirt, intercutting them with images of road traffic.

The completed short

I enjoyed making some work around the subject of the environment, which is becoming ever more urgent as time progresses. As usual with any creative endeavour, there are many things that I’d do differently next time. Nonetheless, I learned a lot, which I hope to bring to my next short project.

WHO Health for All Film Festival

Late last year, I saw by chance that the World Health Organisation (WHO) was organising a short film festival.

The WHO Health For All Film Festival has been running for two years: this year, it requested short films on three possible categories. Universal health coverage, health emergencies, and better health and wellbeing were the topics on offer and I chose the first, as it was partially concerned with non-communicable diseases.

Having had personal experience of Alzheimer’s disease through family and friends, I made a film about this illness’ effects. I remember thinking that it was like having parts removed from something familiar, so I took my idea from there.

Alzheimer’s from Burning Details on Vimeo.

Recently, I received an email detailing the competition’s finalists. My film was not among them, but the shortlisted films displayed a standard of craft in storytelling, sound, photography, editing and design that I found wholly inspiring.

The craft of filmmaking is an ever deepening field. One of the many pleasures I get from making films is discovering more of it. I hope to bring some more of this craft to my work when I enter this competition next year.

Trailer

Fluid trailer from Burning Details on Vimeo.

My micro-budget feature, Fluid, was screened one morning at the Rich Mix cinema in Shoreditch, London to an audience of cast, crew and friends. It was the last step of an extraordinary year-long adventure, in which I’d written, produced, directed, photographed and edited a science fiction film with a crew of professionals and non-professionals: fuelled by enthusiasm, a low budget and hope, we completed this film to the best of our ability. I had never felt more fulfilled.

My wish was to see a project through to screening and, while it didn’t make it into the festivals I entered, I considered it a rewarding project that taught me a great amount about filmmaking. There’s much I wish I could have done differently, but that’s for the next film.

As part of putting the production to bed, I wanted to make a trailer for it. Friends who come with me to the cinema know how much I love trailers and I wanted to do the same for this film: as an exercise it was as eye opening as making a feature.

When I was at college, I met a musician who told me of his experience in editing down an album track to release as a single. I kept thinking of this as I ended Fluid down on iMovie; trying to distill the essence of the film, its story and themes from 75 minutes to under two minutes. Many notes were written before I edited a single image.

On completion, I shared the trailer with the cast and crew: their responses were positive and I’m pleased with the result. But I’m left with one nagging feeling: I want to do more. I want to tell another story. I want to make another film. Onto the next.

Expanding

I’ve enjoyed keeping a website for some years now. It’s mainly shown photos, but recently I’ve started a new section showing films.

At the moment, the section has two films: Nod, a short I made some years ago that played at a few festivals;

and a scene from Fluid, my first feature film, which I completed last year and is currently being entered to festivals.

https://vimeo.com/162731955

More soon…