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Dune, part two
Earlier this year, I had the pleasure of watching Dune: part two. I shared my thoughts with my film group, which i’m adding in edited form here:
I greatly enjoyed watching Dune part one. While I have not yet watched this film on the big screen, its scale and humanity come across strongly. Watching it again on Netflix was a pleasure: I have read the novel in the meantime, and seeing the details: a foreshadowing here, a glance there; was thrilling. But, as Chani said, this story was only beginning and I was looking forward to watching part two.
While my cinema trips are still rare, I was very excited to watch this film on an IMAX screen. Yes, the picture is impeccable, but also the audiences are better behaved too. No one’s here to chat or look at their phone (at least in my screening): the focus was fully on the screen. What was on screen was stunning.
From the first words of the Navigator against that black screen, the film immediately dropped you into this new universe. I liked the way it started a few moments after part one finished, and once the Sadukar started floating up the rock formation, only to be obliterated by the Fremen’s hidden army, I was completely invested in and convinced by the story.
The screenplay visualises Frank Herbert’s novel with economy and imagination: Feyd Rautha’s psychopathy comes across in one (or two) strokes; the ambiguity of Paul’s adopting his holy warrior role is played out in the zeal, skepticism and horror of other characters. Zendaya externalised this perfectly and I loved how the story ended on her standing alone, away from the war to come.
Director Villeneuve got terrific performances from his quite astonishingly good looking cast. Some interesting observations have been made on how using different lenses emphasised Paul growing into his role, but his performance was riveting per se. Javier Bardem and Josh Brolin’s comic chops were used as well as their ability to menace. Christopher Walken’s stillness showed his power amid this war – so much so that you could fully see his coming to Arrakis was an act of weakness. The quartet of Ferguson, Rampling, Pugh and Seydoux made the Bene Gesserit a hyper-Machivellian force to be reckoned with. Skarsgard, Bautista and Butler made the Harkonen’s into pretty much the most terrifying family since the Borgias. Even Anya Taylor-Joy’s cameo as Alia was spot on.
As with part one, the film’s sense of scale, combining design and location with the tangibility of the visual effects creates worlds that you can fully believe in. (Geidi Prime, with its bread, circuses, pollution and division, is a wholly convincing future Earth.) The sound, with a few moments of muddiness around dialogue, was impeccable, combined with imaginative editing and Hans Zimmer’s most beautiful score.
I do think back to David Lynch’s film of Dune. He did say that he “slowly went crazy,” during its production. Its myriad voiceovers and muddled storyline points to just how difficult this work was to adapt: Villeneuve and his team must be praised for doing this so successfully. I wonder what Hollywood will learn from this: even bigger budgets, more stars of the moment in lead roles, lots of worms and many-fingered crustaceans? Or maybe they’ll look for well crafted stories? The box office success of Barbenheimer, along with American Fiction and Anatomy of a Fall’s screenplay awards gives me hope.
By the way, it might seem churlish to add that no one in this film has actually said what the Spice is used for, or that on the announcement of a holy war, I blanched slightly at the prospect of witnessing yet another battle scene. But the story paused just then; it felt like a perfect break.
The water of life looks delicious. Roll on part three.
The walks, part two
The following day I trekked to Bostall Woods, where I shot some video in the forest. I tried to avoid shooting people there, mainly dog-walkers and ramblers, but caught a few of them, partially on camera and definitely on the soundtrack. Also on the soundtrack were tripod noises from the various camera moves I was attempting: definitely some practise and different equipment testing needed there.
I also returned to the river, this time near the Thames Barrier and surrounding warehouses. Some buildings were derelict: I wondered what would be in their place the next time I visited. These were areas that only cyclists and walkers could pass through.
As I carried the heavy photography equipment around the Thames path and surrounding neighbourhoods, I remembered the advice in a guide for wannabe Magnum Photographers: buy comfortable shoes. I’d like to visit more on foot and by bike in future.

Later I shot more video with one of my softbox lights. Following a YouTube tutorial, I tried techniques for video lighting that I hadn’t understood before: I enjoyed the results and will work on them with my own camera. There is still so much to learn.
On returning the equipment, it was a shock to use my mirrorless camera again: it felt light and manageable with familiar controls; almost like a toy. I will shoot with another rental next month; definitely a different camera, just to see how it works with videography and photography, and I’ll be one step closer to finding my regular videography camera.
The walks, part one
A few weekends ago, I did some test shooting with a new camera. Following a digital videographer’s advice, I rented a Canon 5D DSLR, with a microphone, tripod and a 50mm lens.
Having shot for over ten years with mirrorless film and digital cameras, the DSLR was a beast: big and heavy, the camera intimidated me from the moment I took it out of the box. Sat on a bench near the Leadenhall building, I tried taking my first picture: one of the skyscrapers nearby. A few mistakes later, I got it.



My aim was to go to the Royal Exchange, because it tended to be pretty deserted on a weekend. This Saturday, however, it was hosting a thousands strong march for the environment. A number of photographers and videographers were documenting the event, but I decided to duck out until I had an at least rudimentary knowledge of this camera.

Once at home, I transferred the camera to a case of my own and headed out to shoot some video at the Woolwich riverside. From there, I shot tests at a railway crossing in Charlton and on the South Bank.

What struck me on this excursion was what I saw as I walked between and around these sights, looking for something to photograph. I’ve been on photo walks before, both with friends and by myself, but I was really fascinated by the things I didn’t see when I had driven or taken public transport past them many times before.
Building, shops and accommodation I had barely glanced at before were there in all their detail. Different neighbourhoods with their residents and visitors. Different topography and sounds. As I walked, I thought about the photographer Don McCullin’s advise to photographers who wanted be war photographers:
“I say, OK, if you want to be a war photographer, go to the inner cities in England. You don’t have to get on a plane to the Middle East or wherever. There are social wars in our cities: homeless people, poor people, people begging outside of banks. You will find the most incredible poverty and that is a war as big as any other.”
While I didn’t feel as if I were documenting any kind of war, I did feel like I was walking through parts of the city that were ignored: the alleyways and neighbourhoods considered not pretty enough for an Instagram story; the people I may avoid, or who may avoid me; the unobserved. I wondered what I’d learn if I visited these areas more rather than just passing them by.
I finished the my first day shooting video on Waterloo Bridge and the South Bank, before bringing the gear back home.
Portraits: Steve
On the weekend I had rented a Canon 5D for test photography and video, my friend Steve asked me to take a headshot of him for a forthcoming conference he was attending.
Delighted to do so, we excused ourselves from a social meeting at the BFI bar to take these photos up in the Mezzanine Gallery.
I was unused to the size and controls of the D5, so I decided to eschew my usual manual use for automatic control of image making: this set me free from focus and exposure issues, and allowed me to concentrate on composition.

My main aim was to get both the focus on the eyes and the light in them to feature. While I love a shallow depth of field focus, with more control I would like to have featured more of Steve’s surroundings: the background here looks quite anonymous.
A few minutes later we were done.
Portraits: Christmas Lights
My experience with street photography is limited. I like taking street scenes, but I find it difficult to take a portrait of a passer-by. I feel like I have intruded on the subject’s personal space: the few I’ve taken I’ve been loathe to display.
That said, I do love some photographers’ street portraits and I think that I should attempt to take more in my own style. Plucking up the courage to ask someone’s permission to do so would be the first step.
This was the step I took with this portrait. I was with my camera group, taking photos of the West End’s Christmas lights, when I came across this young woman smoking a cigarette. There was something about her calm, away from the busy-ness of the shopping area that surrounded her, that was fascinating so I asked if I could take her photo.
She said yes: I took a few exposures as quickly as I could before thanking her and leaving her to her cigarette.

Looking back, I wish I got this woman’s contact information to send her the final image. It was a pointer to how I could go about street portraiture in future.
While I realised that the street lighting on her face wasn’t satisfactory, an aspect that struck about this image was the woman’s relationship with her surroundings. This made me very interested in environmental portraits, elements of which I’ve tried to bring into my portraiture since.
Portraits: Amy
Amy was after a headshot for acting jobs and I was delighted to have the opportunity take her photo: her expressive features and personality were a great draw.
In the event, the photo session was fun, with us trying a variety of poses and set-ups in the soft light of the garden near her flat. Several choices were made from the completed image, but I always liked the cheekiness of her smile in this one.
The big difference with this portrait was the post production edit. Normally I just balance the levels in Adobe’s Lightroom Classic, but in this case I used Photoshop, to layer and retouch Amy’s hair and skin. It was a fascinatingly involved process and I felt it really enhanced, rather than distorted, the image.
Often I have used just a few tools in Photoshop and wondered how things would go if I made more extreme alterations with skin tone, clothing or backgrounds, but I feel that I would need to design the image in my head before shooting and post production. I hope to experiment more with this in future.
Portraits: Alistair
Some time ago at my old workplace, I made a habit of taking film photographs of work colleagues.
These snaps found their way to the dark room, where I made prints, the best of which I would give to the colleague as a thank you for letting me photograph them.
After taking his photo at work, I asked my then-colleague Alistair, who is now an actor and educator, to work with me on a portrait session. Since we lived in the same area, we agreed to do the portrait session at my flat.
Relishing the opportunity to really spend time on a portrait session, I tried a number of set-ups, with Alistair sitting, standing and at one point singing around my flat, but in the end I found the most interesting place to shoot was outside in the summer light.
I loved the way the natural light caught the details on Alistair’s face and in his eyes. Making prints afterwards, I spent time on tones and highlights, dodging and burning until I got the representation I was after.
Later I saw a headshot Alistair had made for his acting work by another photographer. The quality was stunning and I was inspired by it. I was determined to take more portraits to get to that standard.
Portraits: Alex
Alex was after a headshot for her blog and website and, having photographed her a number of times before, I was very interested in creating a portrait for a professional’s use.
On an overcast day, we walked to a park nearby her flat and found an ideal backdrop of a flowering bush for the photo session.
What marked this out as a different experience for me was how Alex and I worked out the next pose. Working from the communication aspect of her work, we aimed to shoot Alex in mid-conversation.
I was used to shooting portraits in a landscape frame, so the portrait framing and pose were new experiences for me. When faced with the choice of finalised images, Alex went with the portrait composition.
Short film: Sisyphus
Having shot tests and short films on a variety of cameras, it was interesting and reassuring to return to shooting a short film with a familiar camera: my Fujifilm X-Pro-1.
While this model is now supplanted by superior updates, I enjoy using this camera for its manageable size, simplicity of control and terrific image capture, which served me greatly when shooting with it before.
The project this time was “Sisyphus”, a short film about an endless quest, which I shot on green spaces near my home in south east London.
As a filmmaker, I’ve been very interested in writing and directing dialogue-free stories: it was enjoyable to build a story with just sound and vision, and excluding words.
If I were to do it again, I would aim to record better sound. The in-camera microphone caught a lot of wind distortion. While the camera has no socket for an external microphone, I could have recorded clean atmosphere tracks with my digital sound recorder.
Editing in iMovie was enjoyable. While I have the rudiments down on this tool, I’d like to experiment more with sound post-production on future projects.
According to Zanah Thirus’ excellent and informative microbudget indie filmmaker’s podcast, the most welcome compression for festivals is an H264 compressed MP4 file. Getting to this with iMovie was difficult: for some reason, when exporting, my settings button didn’t show. It was sheer luck that I clicked on a certain part of a grey area on the export window that brought up the menu I was after.
I’ve been editing some other videos; mainly test shoots and home recording, but in every shoot and edit I have aimed to learn something. Whatever the mistakes or learns in this, I enjoyed this production and look forward to my next.
Realities
I’ve just completed a short film that I’d been working on for a few weeks.
“Realities” takes an idea from a science fiction feature screenplay I’m currently writing and imagines it in another setting. While I may not have brought complete clarity to the idea, I enjoyed making this short film and may rework aspects of the feature script as a result of making this.
Realities from Burning Details on Vimeo.
Two of my favourite aspects of this short film were building props and recording sound, the latter of which has been a problem in previous shoots. My next hope is to use more lighting, which I have also found difficult previously: short films offer great opportunities for experimentation.
Now “Realities” is complete, I’m going to make another short science fiction film, from a screenplay of about equal length. I have a few other ideas mulling around, as well as the opportunity to try some new editing platforms: I’ll see what new aspects I can bring to these productions.




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