Category: writing
“The Good Boss” review
I sent my thoughts on Fernando Leon de Aranoa film, “The Good Boss” to my film group when we watched it a few weeks ago. I’m sharing them after editing here:

“The Good Boss” was an enjoyable film… and, oh: is that all I can say: that it was just “okay”? Why is this the case with this particular film?
The casting was terrific, with Javier Bardem (as the titular boss Blanco) supplying just the right amount of smoothness to his emptily charming boss (he has to play Berlusconi!) The supporting cast deliver their wholly recognisable parts well. I have seen the street thugs, security guards, middle management and trophy wives shown here in real life. The story was fun, but maybe that was the problem here: it didn’t really go anywhere unexpected.
This film’s wealthy characters (in this case, a man who has inherited his factory from his father [but, oh no: he never got anything handed to him]) get away with things (with the Intern following in Blanco’s footsteps) and its lower class characters get screwed over. In a way, this film’s probably very true to life, but it never became really entertaining, in the same way a movie like “Force Majeure” could make fireworks with the most mundane moments.
While the meat of the film seemed bland, the sauce was exquisite: the film was immaculately lit, reminding me of Phillipe Rousellot‘s natural light photography in “Too Beautiful for You” (directed by Betrand Blier [a director who would have definitely brought in the fireworks to this story]). The design, costumes and sound were top notch, with Blanco’s Jaguar being a world all of its own.
This film could have been gentle in its ironies or vicious in its satire, but the story, theme and its treatment seemed all out of balance, and the whole film came out a little bit “meh”. If only the whip had been cracked to force up these elements a little more. A pity. Anyway, it passed the time pleasantly.
Looking over these notes, I seem a touch negative. Was I too harsh? Was there something I missed about this film?
Far away, so close!
I’ve spent some spare time watching TIVO’d editions of France 24’s daily arts programme, Encore.
As I watched its features on music, film books and exhibitions, I realised that this was the main arts programme that I enjoyed regularly, more than any other on television or radio. I also realised that I had come across more work from Black British creators, promoted with enthusiasm and clarity, on this show than I had from any arts programme from the UK.
Of course, there is much arts coverage on British media, but I wondered why, despite exclusives and features with some of my favourite creators, none of it had involved me in the way Encore has done.
Watching the recorded and online episodes, I felt that it was because Encore portrayed the arts as something attainable and part of everyday life; something reachable, as opposed to something to be consumed, made by someone special, touched by an incredible talent or genius; someone far away.
In the UK, the creative industries contribute £10 billion per year to the economy, yet the arts are looked on as a glorified hobby, practised by an out of touch elite, or dreamers who need to knuckle down and get a real job. It was telling that the UK government’s cyber campaign belittled a woman of colour’s career as a ballet dancer. And yet, articles abound on how much culture we are consuming on streaming platforms, in museums and with street art. Creativity is consumed, but not appreciated.
The Saatchi Gallery warehouse fire was joked about in the UK’s mainstream press. The Marble Arch Mound, while maybe mistaken in aspects of its execution, has been vilified in the media. Contrast this with with a ballet performance at a demonstration in Paris, or the Christo wrapping of the Arc de Triomphe: creativity appreciated and celebrated as part of everyone’s life.
Sometimes art touches the public in the UK, such as The Sultan’s Elephant or Little Amal’s walk, but these are seem to be outliers, rather than the norm, for art to be part of the public sphere.
I think of how my own attitude to art and creativity is part of this. I’ve done a lot of work in photography, drawing and filmmaking, and while I have found it hugely enjoyable, I have also found it difficult to take seriously. Accepting money for my work was at first tinged with guilt, because I enjoyed it so much. The idea of making a living from creativity is both hugely attractive and incredible, and I’ve had to do so much work on myself to focus on this goal, even now.
I think back to art lessons at school that I didn’t take seriously, even though I was obsessed by film, photography and costume: I couldn’t imagine that there was a link between what I was watching in the cinema, reading in magazines and seeing on television with what I was studying.
But then I think back even further to a childhood where I drew for enjoyment, where I built things for fun and made things for pleasure. All play. Did I look down on creativity, or was I made to look down on creativity, because it was just play? How could something that was so easy and so much fun be taken seriously?
I find it hard to think of a typically British film, or a film with a British, or even English look, without that film having to hark back to an imagined past. Francois Truffaut’s comment about British Cinema being a contradiction in terms comes to mind. Is there a British aesthetic, in the same way one can see a French or American “look” to a film? Does this spring from art as self expression not being taken seriously? Even in the US, creativity is taken seriously as a business. (British bass guitarist Pino Palladino, having to take daily Covid tests in order to work as a session musician in Los Angeles, acknowledged that his work was seen as essential to the economy and that it was “better than Britain telling you if you’re a musician or an artist you might have to look for a new job.”)
The path towards the arts in education becomes ever more narrow. Proposals to cut funding to “unprofitable” arts courses find sympathy with the current government. Students aiming for creative careers tend to be from backgrounds that can be relaxed about money or funding, leading to a homogeneity in practitioners. And with that practitioners’ similarity, a homogeneity in stories and worlds being depicted will follow.
I’m unsure how this can change, or whether it will change any time soon. At the moment, all I can see myself doing is creating, no matter what the circumstances: be it in work, unemployed, or in comfort. Create, create create, no matter what. And at some point, the arts in general may not seem so far away, but close.
One month off
A family holiday during August coincided with my completing work on a number of screenplay stages. I completed the first draft of one, a scene by scene outline of a second and a treatment for a third.
The holiday took me away from my computer and notebooks, so I found myself taking a break from all three projects for nearly a month. I returned to them with fresh eyes last month.
I’ve often baulked at the oft-given advice that one should put a newly-completed screenplay draft away for a month before reading over it: I wondered what one could do in the meantime, and satisfied myself with working on other projects.
On my return, I went straight into writing the first draft of my scene by scene outlined screenplay, while making notes on expanding the treatment. As to the first draft, I’ve started reading through it.

I knew that when writing it there were many problems with the story: it was misshapen; characters were under-developed; the story lacked drive. Only by going back to it and starting the rewriting process can any of these problems be solved. And only by being away from this draft for a month was I able to look at it with fresh eyes.
Screenplays all start somewhere and while my particular first draft needs a lot of work, it actually exists, and what needs to be worked on can now be seen. There may be a germ of a good idea in it, but unless that idea can be worked on, there’s little purpose to it.
Michaela Coel’s “I May Destroy You” went through 191 drafts. Jordan Peele’s “Get Out” went through 200 drafts. One of my favourite directors takes many years over his screenplays.
I hope to add a fourth screenplay project to the three screenplays I’m working on. Many new drafts need to follow in the months and years to come. As I write more and more drafts, I realise that writing well takes a great amount of time.
Realities
I’ve just completed a short film that I’d been working on for a few weeks.
“Realities” takes an idea from a science fiction feature screenplay I’m currently writing and imagines it in another setting. While I may not have brought complete clarity to the idea, I enjoyed making this short film and may rework aspects of the feature script as a result of making this.
Realities from Burning Details on Vimeo.
Two of my favourite aspects of this short film were building props and recording sound, the latter of which has been a problem in previous shoots. My next hope is to use more lighting, which I have also found difficult previously: short films offer great opportunities for experimentation.
Now “Realities” is complete, I’m going to make another short science fiction film, from a screenplay of about equal length. I have a few other ideas mulling around, as well as the opportunity to try some new editing platforms: I’ll see what new aspects I can bring to these productions.
Cracking it
Writing continues, with a treatment for a screenplay being worked on.
Normally I have rushed through this step, hoping to iron out any problems with the outline or scene by scene stage, but not this time. I have worked on the treatment for this story repeatedly before moving onto the next stage. I think I’ve cracked the story… almost.

At the moment, the story’s as good as I can get it. Improvements can only come with more details as I fill out scenes, develop more characters and and format supporting stories. It’s been a painstaking stage, but this process of building the story before before writing the screenplay has been enormously rewarding.
Finding my way
I’d recently written about my need for extensive planning with my screenplays. Right now, I am outlining one screenplay, scene by scene; while ironing out the treatment of another. But interesting things are also happening with the third screenplay.
This screenplay is outlined, but not to the point of a scene by scene list. Writing has been slow and meandering at times, with my having to fill in blank spots that I should have ironed out in the planning. But every now and then a revelation comes up in the process of writing that I didn’t expect: a plot turn or line of dialogue that I didn’t imagine; the story coming alive as I write.

This is not how I’d like to write in future. The hope of writing something interesting, rather than planning something that I want to write, isn’t an ideal prospect when working on a 90 page screenplay. But these moments of revelation have been pleasantly surprising.
Changes
Following the return to this WordPress, I have made a few improvements to my blog.
These include a post-per-page limit, an archive calendar, a tag / subject list and a list of blogs I follow.
I hope that this will make my blog a more involved and and enjoyable read; indeed, I hope to make more adjustments to it as time goes by…
Chipping Away
Screenwriting continues.
I find that as I put more thought into preparing the treatments, outlines and scene-by-scenes, I’m chipping away at the story problems that have had a tendency to crop up when I’m writing the screenplay proper.
The long, puzzling preparation can be frustrating at times, but it is well worth it to avoid those moments I’ve had when struggling through a page.
My greatest hope is to take the preparation to such a stage that I cannot wait to write the scenes: the attraction of having an air-tight story with scenes one is excited to depict is huge.

I’ve nearly broken the spine of one screenplay treatment and I am going to start work on the scene-by-scene list on another: still a long way from the writing, but the foundations will be solid.
Learning
Scriptwriting continues, with three screenplays at different stages. In each, I have learned a technique I will be definitely sticking to in future.
I completed the outline of one script today, which I’m very excited about. The story intrigues me and I want to tell it well. The next script is a rewrite, following a first round of feedback from beta readers. It should be a leaner, more focused rewrite. Lastly is a screenplay that I am currently writing from a completed outline, page by page.
Each screenplay, at their different stages, has taught me the importance of meticulous planning. As I write the screenplay pages from the outline, I find that I have not planned it well enough: my pages meander. The script rewrite planning is at treatment stage and the story needs to be completely ironed out before I start rewriting the screenplay itself.
The experience of these screenplays has seen me change my approach to writing. Normally, with an outline complete, I would go straight to writing the screenplay. Now, I want to go one planning stage further and write a scene by scene plan. Here, I can work out precisely what’s happening and where in the screenplay. I can also summarise how a scene is going to progress in itself.

My hope is that all this preparation will make the act of writing screenplays more focused: often, I have got lost in a scene, not knowing where the conflict is or where it fits into the wider story. The meticulous scene by scene plan, be it on a list or on index cards, can greatly assist on this.
In any case, I have learned this by writing scene plays day by day, page by page, scene by scene. The practice is making the process better, if not perfect.
New filmmaking
After making my environmental short, I have started work on a new short film.
I wrote the script some months ago, but put it to one side as I had started writing a feature screenplay that expanded on this short’s idea. As writing progressed, I returned to this short as I found myself more and more interested in playing with its ideas.

Although realising this short film is a daunting prospect, the shoot has been enjoyable so far, with props and shot set ups I haven’t used before. Where I think things will become complex is with the sound, which will be a huge part of this film.
In any case, I’ve greatly enjoyed the process. I’m looking on short films more as sketches or practice and I’m enjoying making as many as possible, on any media I can use. And the more I do it, the less daunting it will be.

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